Tuesday 15 October 2019
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Very interesting recount Rinaz. I love the way you have added detail, and made your writing interesting. Don't forget to add vivid verbs and amazing adjectives too. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteHello Rinaz.I also went to Hanmer in the holidays.My daughter wanted to go bungy jumping so we went there on Sunday.There were lots of people in Hanmer when we went.Were there many people at the hydroslide?.
ReplyDeleteHI Rianz I like the way you write about go to mega air and hammer springs.I think the lie is you had a sleepover with kelis leala and
ReplyDeletehi rinaz,
ReplyDeleteThs is your blogger buddy.
did you like your journey to hanmer springs.
how was it.
did you enjoy.
how much degree(celsius) was there.
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