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Tuesday 7 December 2021

The house filled with snow

Kia ora readers 

Today we had to do creative story about a picture. First we had to look at the top right corner and write about that. Then we had to look around the picture and write about, and then we look at the bottom and write about and introduce a character and then write a problem.  

On a nice cold night two huge trees with lots of branches on the tree. There was lots of snow on the trees too. Behind the trees you could see the pitch black sky with stars everywhere on the sky. When you look around you could see behind the house a really big bright moon. There was a small house in the corner behind the two trees and there was a small Christmas tree beside the small house, and also there was a really big house in the front of the big moon. Here is the big mean wolf comes, this wolf was always coming for feast. The wolf always steal the feast from the owners in the two houses. 

The wolf is really big and has really big white teeth, He is a male and is also a grey wolf. You can't talk to him because if you do he will chase you down until you get really puffed and tired. He has a huge pack and he is the alpha his job is to get food for him and the rest of the pack so they survive When sometimes the alpha is sick one of the slaves have to go get food, but the alpha hardly gets sick anyways. 

Today the alpha went to go get food, but something bad happend. There was a tall man looking at me with a shotgun. The man shot the wolf but he missed and now the wolf is really angry. The wolf jumped on the man and bit his arm, the man shot again bit it hit his tail. The wolf made a run for it and went in the house, stole a big turkey that was on the table and ran out of the house. The man was screaming and crying at the same time. 

Finally the wolf reached home safely bit his tail was hurting. The wolf stayed home for a bit because of his tail and made his slaves to go get the feast. Two weeks later his tail got much better but the owners of that house moved, but don't worry when the alpha was home the slaves found a different house to get food from. The alpha was really happy and proud of his slaves. The end.


Thanks for looking at my work please comment and have a awesome day. 


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