This term we have been working on strong narrative, which is believable, consistent descriptive and a strong structure.
Yesterday, we were learning to show not tell. We looked at our action words then replaced them to strong words, by using
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This how we did it. Here is the weak action word sentence:
Lydia gave me a flat white.
This is the sentence we changed:
Lydia kindly honoured me a flat white
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Hi Rinaz, Its Lydia here! I really enjoyed reading your new blog post! I can tell you really like flat whites! I also liked how you changed your sentence a bit longer and more stronger. Anyway have a nice day and come check out my blog some time!
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