I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Rinaz it's me Malama I really love your background it reminds me of Christmas but maybe next time you could make your sentence a little bit longer. And you could also say how is your cousin cheeky.
Your words stand out well on the background Rinaz.It's simple.Easy to read.Well done. Your sentence does need a capital letter though.I can see you have ended with a full stop so well done on that.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Rinaz it's me Malama I really love your background it reminds me of Christmas but maybe next time you could make your sentence a little bit longer. And you could also say how is your cousin cheeky.
ReplyDeleteHi Malama thanks for commenting on my post. I didn't know what to say about my sentence, so i just said something short. Ok bye for now :)
DeleteYour words stand out well on the background Rinaz.It's simple.Easy to read.Well done.
ReplyDeleteYour sentence does need a capital letter though.I can see you have ended with a full stop so well done on that.
Hello Rinaz.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.