Today I will be showing you what we have been doing for writing in Term 2. this term we have been learning how to write a strong narrative. A strong narrative is beliveable, descriptive and consistent.
Today we did sick sentences. We changed boring sentences in to descriptive, beliveable sentences.
Here is one of my boring sentence:
Anna sat down.
here is one of my descriptive sentence:
Anna sat down on the cold, solid, hard and uncomfortable concrete.
here is my story but its kinda not finshed.
thank you for looking at my blog I hope you liked my story please comment and have awesome day.
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