Morena readers
Today we had to do another 100 word challenge. This picture was a tiny little cute penguin with a little Christmas hat on its head.
Here is my work
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Morena readers
Today we had to do another 100 word challenge. This picture was a tiny little cute penguin with a little Christmas hat on its head.
Here is my work
Thanks for looking at my work please comment and have a great day.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Rinaz
ReplyDeleteOh no! The ending when the penguin leaves really left your writing on a cliffhanger! Is he okay? Where did he go? It leaves your audience wanting to know what happens next to the penguin.
I really liked this piece of writing!
Keep up the nice work from home.
- Miss Birtch